Saturday, 1 August 2009

The trouble with our Ann!

Oh Ann, oh Ann, what did you do?
That gutter got the best of you!
One minute you were quick of pace,
The next you were flat on your face!
A nice black eye and swollen lip,
All because your feet did trip.
I hope the scars are not too deep,
Just close one eye and go to sleep.
I know you like to look all fab,
But fret you not, I like that scab.
Oh deary me what did you do?
That gutter got the best of you!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Deborah,
    I am not just commenting on this poem but each of those you have posted. I write poetry myself and have a website and I am round and about reading others poems so think I can make an honest comment.!! I think all of your poems are brilliant - such a variation and beautifully written with great rhythm and rhyme. The words just flow making it easy to get straight into them. Hope you keep on writing as you have such a good talent.
    Thanks for sharing your work.
    Marian (Vickie)

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